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I am a Haiku
My lines go five, seven, five
Insert punchline here

I am your shadow
Our shapes define each other
We are mutual slaves

Flowers must bloom well
Even eagles primp and preen
The roach has freedom

I am the silence
Keeper of all earthly sounds
They all return to me

I am your center
Quiet and safe eye of storms
Safe from the earth's wrath

I am your demise,
Sweeter is your life through me
Immortals taste bland
©2009 ~Evil-M
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Was writing little haikus in my mind all day, after reading fight club hehe.
This should probably be in scraps, but meh.

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I LOVE IT

Now I want to write haikus for my final ItCW thing. Instead I'm just going to do a recounting of my zombie plans, in epic zombie fighting story form, which is cool because I will get to beat up on my zombie roomies FUCK YEAH

However your poems are much better and I am somewhat in love with these :3 Fave tiem!

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Aristotle was nerfed in the last patch. Existential Insight now has a two minute cooldown.
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Also, WOOOO FIGHT CLUB I am glad you like the book :)

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Aristotle was nerfed in the last patch. Existential Insight now has a two minute cooldown.
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haha thanks. That damn book got me saying things like 'I am martin's overworked procrastinatory urge' or 'I am martin's thwarted desire' in my head.

Though seriously, it gets you thinking about life, the universe and everything quite a bit.

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If it'd been me stealing the sun, I wouldn't give it to humans to keep them warm. I'd drown it in the ocean and start buying their souls by selling them fire.
:iconevil-m:
How will that relate to the readings? damn, I wish we could do freeform. I really want to make something horrific and fun.

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If it'd been me stealing the sun, I wouldn't give it to humans to keep them warm. I'd drown it in the ocean and start buying their souls by selling them fire.
:icondurianssmellnice:
Fight club!! Somehow, I found the movie a tad bit more epic than the book. Still a good book though.

I liked the last two paragraphs.

"I am your center
Quiet and safe eye of storms
Safe from the earth's wrath"

"I am your demise,
Sweeter is your life through me
Immortals taste bland"

Seriously, you're writing skills are almost god-like! O___O
:iconevil-m:
Wow, that's the first time I've ever been called godlike. Thank you very much O_O
And yeah, Fight club is an excellent movie. Raises many decent philosophical points before it gets all cultish and weird.

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If it'd been me stealing the sun, I wouldn't give it to humans to keep them warm. I'd drown it in the ocean and start buying their souls by selling them fire.
:icondurianssmellnice:
You're most welcome, godlike writer of nearly infinite capabilities who leaves a trail of gapping, awe-struck people in his wake. XD
Yeah, I can't disagree with you there. However, the weirdness of the movie is kinda the reason why I like it so much. Lol.
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I know, weird movies are the best lol.
And thank you so much. Its nice to have someone say that once in awhile. I especially enjoyed the whole godlike thing. That's an analogy I vehemently want to be associated with.

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If it'd been me stealing the sun, I wouldn't give it to humans to keep them warm. I'd drown it in the ocean and start buying their souls by selling them fire.
:icondurianssmellnice:
Weird movies are cool, and believe it or not...a couple of years ago, I watched the Care Bears movie. It was so weird, I loved it. No Joke.

I guess it makes sense for anyone wanting to be associated with power and greatness beyond human understanding. I believe it bares similarities to the obscenely vast amounts people who desire fame, yet the two subjects ARE very different :O. That one got me thinking. =____=

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